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| BetsyFerwerda | Uploading Paper | 0 | Nov 27 2008, 12:00 AM EST by BetsyFerwerda | ||
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Thread started: Nov 27 2008, 12:00 AM EST
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I tried to Upload my paper to the wiki, but it says the site has used all 40 of its attachments? I will email it to you, can you let me know you got it?
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| Webbmaster | Pieces of the paper | 1 | Nov 24 2008, 11:45 PM EST by Webbmaster | ||
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Thread started: Nov 24 2008, 11:43 PM EST
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The intro starts in the middle of things, which is fine. I think the transition out of the initial scene is a little abrupt and awkward - the "Wrong" transition. See if you can make this transition more smooth, probably be being more orthodox with it. The thesis needs a little thought as to the wording. If the monument is largely forgotten, can it be important to memory? Anyway, you're getting the draft down and moving in a good direction with it.
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Paper for seminar.doc (Word Document - 40k)
posted by BetsyFerwerda Nov 19 2008, 1:21 PM EST
Rough version of paper, I work on different parts at a time, so no one section is completly done except the Intro
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Paper for seminar.doc (Word Document - 28k)
posted by BetsyFerwerda Nov 12 2008, 2:53 PM EST
Very beginnings of paper
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