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The background section you have posted, Abby, makes some good use of secondary literature. I want to suggest, however, that you eliminate the second-person usage at the start of it. Figure out how to express the opening without using "you."
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RE: Sections of paper
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Nov 24 2008, 11:38 PM EST
Don't know if you've budgeted out the pages for your paper overall, but the main body appears a little short. It seems to me you could add more material on the Robalo, if you have it, and also more on the three ND submariners.
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